Senin, 02 Juni 2014

THE TASK FOR MEETING 8 ( EXPOSITORY )




Why teens smoke cigarettes


Smoking is a practice in which a substance is burned and the resulting smoke breathed in to be tasted or inhaled. In Indonesia, smoking has been being culture. There are so many disadvantages from the smoker. Because the advantage just for the factory from the cigarette and to from tax.  And the tax of cigarette factory is very big. The negative effect of smoke related disease kills one half of all long term smokers but these diseases may also be contracted by non smokers. Smoked tobacco in the forms of cigarettes, pipes and cigars causes lung and cancers, emphysema and other respiratory diseases. In fact, smoking causes ninety percent of all lung cancers causes. Smoking is one of the most common forms of recreational drug use. Some of the substances are classified as hard narcotics, like heroin, and etc. Now, the smoker is not only adult, but also the teens. In this era globalization, there are the teens brave to try smoke cigarettes. There are 38, 4 % from the teens (15-19 years old) who have try smoke.
Teenagers usually smoke cigarettes. There are the reasons why the teens smoke cigarettes. First, they are seeking the answer to try to be "cool" or try to be "adult". Sometimes, teens see their parents smoking and want to do it because teens see their parents do it. This is a major problem because they want to be like their parents and sense they are adults, teens also want to feel like adults. Second, teen smoking is trying to change their mood if life is becoming difficult. A lot of adults and teens have depression and when they feel sad, they find cigarettes to "help" them go through their sadness. Not all people with depression smoke though. Take homeless people as an example, They want to forget about their troubles and smoke weed or get drunk because homeless people think that getting high or drunk will make them happier, and  Smoke can make them enjoy. Lastly, teens see their friends do it (Smoke). Their friends are cool to them. Then teens will attempt to "fit in" with their friends. Most of the time, the most common cause is pier-pressure with others. Pier-pressure is when someone pressures someone to do something when the person says no. When the person says no to a cigarettes, the person with the cigarettes will say, "But it's cool, if you refuse a cigarette, you are not cool like us. Everyone smokes and that makes them cool."  The teens never realize about the dangerous from the smoking. In fact, most adult smokers begin smoking as teenagers. As teenagers, we must help another teenager to avoid or prevent from smoking. We can help them or give them some motivation or inspiration with the step like, Set a good example (Explain about the effect of smoking and the disadvantage from smoking), understand the attraction, Say no to teens smoking, do the math, and etc. Those are the reason why teens smoke cigarettes.





Note:
Green       : Topic Sentence
Blue         : Supporting Sentences
Yellow       : Concluding Sentence

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Selasa, 20 Mei 2014

the 7 task. Descriptive Text


My Dream Family

Dream is a wish all people from their heart or their mind. I believe that all people have a future dream in their life. The dream can become some inspiration or motivation to all people when they are wanted to do something. If people do not have a dream they will be lazy person because they do not have the purpose of their life. So, we must have a dream to motivation and inspiration in our live.
Well, I would like to tell you about my dream family. Now, I’m a 21 years old. I have a dream to get married when I was on 25 years old. I always have a dream to be a good wife to my husband and good mother to my child. My dream is I have a happily family. So, it makes me difficult to choose the true candidate husband. J. Because there are so many woman become a single parent because wrong when they are choose the husband. But, with this experience can give me some inspiration or vigilance when I want to choose the candidate husband. I want a choose a good husband, who can lead my family, make me happy, wise person, care, good looking, kind, can guide me to the right path and the most important is he always love me and my family.
My dream is living in a happy family. My happy family will be complete when I have a child after I get married. I hope, after I get married I have twin daughters. And I will give them a name “Dara Widan Teresia and Rara Widan Teresia “. I give them this name because, this name have the important meaning in my life. When I have a child I will become good mother for them. I will give the full attention, and teach them to be good child and are useful child for country and nation. I will make family always happy, and I will to be loyal wife to my husband, always care, accompany him when happy or suffer, receive all the drawbacks and always obedient to him. I will always try to be a pious wife. In Islam, the pious wife is one of the ways to get the heaven.
In my mind, happily family is not only rich treasure. But happily family is affection who not priceless. Because, the treasure cannot be guarantee happiness in a family or household. and I want to try start everything from the bottom. and I want to be a rich family because me and my husband efforts, not from my parents.
That’s all about my dream family. I hope this could be reality in my life. And I can get married when I was on 25 years old, god give me the good husband, and the twin daughters. J.





Note : Total 475 Words.
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Senin, 28 April 2014

6 th meeting




‘’ The hardest thing I had to do ‘’


        One day, in the village there was lived a beautiful girl. She was born on March 03 1993, 21 years ago. She lived with her parents and her brother. She didn’t have sister.  Her named dwi astuti,and she was me. I was born in a beautiful village far away from the hustle of the city. I was born with the helped from a midwife who lived near with my house. I came from a simple family. And because of their affection, now I can grew up to be a cheerful and beautiful girl.  (Orientation)

  I always had a dreamt to make my parents happy. And made them didn’t regretted was had daughter liked me. The hardest thing I have to do is the effort to change my life to be better. And what can I do to make my parent proud of me, because it the purpose in my life. But all of it was very difficult for me to do.
My parents always give the best for me, but so far there is nothing can I do to reciprocate them. Changed my lives to be better that is the hardest thing I had to do. Because I was confused where to start and what can I do?
This time, I was student in one of the universities of Lampung, especially in English department, and it as the first step to start my career through the education, with the hoping to become successful teacher. Despite was there are a lot of obstacles who can disturb my studied, I always kept my spirit. And this all not made me surrender.
Moreover, the hardest thing I have to do is learn to be a professional or good teacher. Who this profession is deviates from the real of my ideas. So, when I had to study to become a teacher, it is very difficult for me.   But, I always believe there are the ways to us as long as we always tried. (Complication).

Therefore I am tried to change my life by starting all of my seriousness in study hard and tried to be a good daughter who always obey with my parent.
(Resolution ).

And finally, all the anxiety in my heart a little relieved.  Because my family always gave me support and motivation. So, that it can help me to living my life.  (Conclusion)


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Senin, 21 April 2014

5 Th Meeting ( Writing 3 )



A.    The description about Narrative Writing and How to Differ from Other Genres


Narrative text is a text the telling of a story : the succession of events is given in chronological order.The basic purpose of narrative is to entertain, to gain and hold a readers' interest. However narratives can also be written to teach or inform, to change attitudes / social opinions. Narratives sequence people/characters in time and place but differ from recounts in that through the sequencing, the stories set up one or more problems, which must eventually find a way to be resolved. 
-      The different from other genres is the narrative text focusing some specific participants that have several           structural features. Narrative is used most often in: Fables, Myths and legends, Detective stories, adventure         stories, Thrillers, Period Dramas.  Patterns in a simple narrative: beginning - middle - end of early                     narratives usually contains introduction atmosphere and character that is introduced. The early part must         be made attractive in order to bind the reader. The middle part is a part that gives rise to a conflict. Conflict       then directed towards the climax of the story. After conflict arises and reaches the climax, the story                  gradually subsides. End of story has died down a variety of ways of expressing. Some are told by long, some        are short, and some are trying to drape the end of the story with his own invited readers to guess.
-      And to know the different narrative from other genres is we can find from the following a specific structure        like: setting, characters, Problem, Events and the Resolution.



    B.    The Steps How To Make Narrative writing


Before making a narrative text, writer should consider step by step in the manufacture of the text. It aims to: facilitate in making an essay writer, guidelines that regular writing and directed,

The depiction of the patterns and links between main ideas / topics, Helping authors see topics that stray from the topic and the presence of the same basic idea, Being a general overview of the structure of essay ideas, thus helping the collection of reference material needed.


The Steps to Make Narrative Writing

1.      Decide on a topic --------- what is the story want to tell? 
             Look over the list of suggestions or brainstorm a few of your own. Remember,a narrative is a story with characters, setting, problem, and solution.
           Be sure to choose a story that has all the parts of a good narrative.
           Example : My Great Experience


      2.       Establish the setting
Answer the questions who?  What?  Where?  When?  And  Why?  These questions help to narrow and describe the setting before the problem or action takes place.
          Use the center block of Four Square to jot ideas for:
·        Who was there before the action?
·        What were they doing before the action?
·        Where were they before the action?
·        When does the story take place?
·        Why are these people there?
Setting is important in many ways.  Not only does it affect the action and events in the story, but it can also affect the way characters act.
Example      : - In the village, there was a girl named dwi astuti. She was the cheerful girl    and spoiled girl. She was me. In my lived I had so many experiences. There    are the good and the bad experience. From child hood until adulthood,          many memories that could not forgot.
             -When I was in junior high school, I had a dream to become a midwife. 


   3.       Decide on the events of the story.  These events should be actions with strong, active verbs.  If there is no action, there is no story. Use the first three squares of the Four Square to outline the events that create the plot.  The fourth and final square is reserved for the “Big Ending”!  The “big ending” should give the outcome or solution to the problem that is identified in the plot.

Example   :   I was not willing to continue my education. And I decided to stop my education until one year.  My father’s always gave me motivation to continue my studied, and he always asked me to keep my spirit. Because it, I try to changed my mind. And I would made my family proud of me, so I continue my studied in the Muhammadiyah University of Metro especially in English department.

      
      4.       Details, Details, Details
Details are the way to elaborate on the events that create the plot.  These important bits are the way to explain “what happened” and “how it happened”.  Think of how it would be if a friend tried to tell you what happened in a movie you have not seen without any details of what and how things happened.  You would not understand the movie.  Details help the reader to see what you see.
Remember that each square of the Four Square represents a new event, and you should take the time to really detail each event before moving to the next.
Example            : When I graduate from the senior high school around 2011, I felt happy because my family had allowed me to continue my studied in the midwife faculty. But, when I would do the registration, my grandmother was sick. And the costs for the payment to my education used for the treatment of my grandmother’s. Therefore, I had decided to continue my studied in the STAIN. At the time, I had received in the STAIN. But, when I would re-registration, my family had the problem. The problem is I lost both my motorcycles in the next morning. It was made me felt hopeless and at the time, I was not willing to continue my education. And I decided to stop my education until one year.  My father’s always gave me motivation to continue my studied, and he always asked me to keep my spirit. Because it, I try to changed my mind. And I would make my family proud of me, so I continue my studied in the Muhammadiyah University of Metro especially in English department.


   5.  Connect the events
Connectors are a good way to connect the events in the story.  They are used to show the time relationship between the events.  Connectors have a dramatic effect.  In one story it may be meaningful if something happens immediately.  In another story, if something happens 10 years later, it may be equally shocking.
Add the connector words to the top, left corner of each of the squares in the Four Square.
Example            :  one year ago, at the time,



6. Add “ Vivids “

          Vivids” are those words that add life to your writing.  They bring the reader to the scene of the story.  Vivid language lets the reader know what the writer sees, hears, feels, smells and tastes.  Vivids include clear, concise and “vivid” adjectives to describe people or things.  Clear adverbs help to clarify when, where, why or how certain actions or events occurred.  Specific nouns let the reader see what you see, strong, select verbs demonstrate the actions of the characters just as you want them to be.Remember to include dialogue to express mood, feeling, emotion and point of view.  Figurative language and sensory imagery are also excellent examples of vivids.  To help select your vivids, ask yourself “like what?” when telling about an event.  Choose vivids that show, not tell.  Select appropriate vivids at appropriate times in the story.  Don’t force vivids in, just to have them in your story; they are only useful when they add strength to the writing. 
    Vivids are placed just below each of the details outlined for each event in the Four Square.          
      Example  : I felt happy when saw people worked in the health world,
      It was made me felt hopeless and at the time, I was not willing to continue my education.                                            


7.       “Hook” your reader


Remember the purpose of the narrative is to entertain the reader.  It is important to attract the reader’s attention right from the start so they want to read the story.  On way to attract the reader is to use a “hook”.  A “hook” is a one-sentence device placed at the beginning of the story and generate curiosity in the reader.  The “hook” is then followed by the setting paragraph, the event paragraphs and the conclusion paragraph.
Example    : I would be wasting this opportunity. I would make my family proud of me. 


Or you can make with another step:

1.         Should decide a plot
Example: Forward
2.       Set the situation
Example: once upon a time ago there was a beautiful girl in the small village.
3.       Should the topic           
Example: Love
          4.       Make the topic become topic sentence
Example; Romeo love Juliet until they are pas away.
          5.       Develop it with supporting sentence
Example: Romeo not rich people but juliet always love romeo.
          6.       And the last is controlling idea to control your sentences.




Narrative Writing



Incredible Experience in My Life

 In the village, there was a girl named dwi astuti. She was the cheerful girl and spoiled girl. She was me. In my lived I had so many experiences. There are the good and the bad experience. From child hood until adulthood, many memories that could not forgot.
One of them is about the problems in my lived.  When I was in junior high school, I had a dream to become a midwife. Because, I felt happy when saw people worked in the health world. And I think it was the noble job. But, because there are so many problems in my lived, it made my future cannot be achieved. When I graduate from the senior high school around 2011, I felt happy because my family had allowed me to continue my studied in the midwife faculty. But, when I would do the registration, my grandmother was sick. And the costs for the payment to my education used for the treatment of my grandmother’s. Therefore, I had decided to continue my studied in the STAIN. At the time, I had received in the STAIN. But, when I would re-registration, my family had the problem. The problem is I lost both my motorcycles in the next morning. It was made me felt hopeless and at the time, I was not willing to continue my education. And I decided to stop my education until one year.  My father’s always gave me motivation to continue my studied, and he always asked me to keep my spirit. Because it, I try to changed my mind. And I would made my family proud of me, so I continue my studied in the Muhammadiyah University of Metro especially in English department.
Finally, I was able to continue my education in the Muhammadiyah University of Metro, my beloved campus. In this campus I had much knowledge. In this campus I felt comfortable with the good friends and the handsome and beautiful lectures. Although everything was different from my ideals, I remain grateful to god. Because, I believed god was knows which the best to my lived was. And I think this is the great or the incredible experienced of my lived. Because, so many obstacle to continue my education. And I would be wasting this opportunity. I would make my family proud of me. And this all was become incredible experience in my lived, and taught how to be a person who never gave up.


Note     : The Underline Sentence are Topic Sentence.


The Reason Why Called Topic Sentence:

1.         In my lived I had so many experiences.  
 Because this sentence is a complete sentence that can stand alone

2.       I had a dream to become a midwife. 
Because this sentence is a complete sentence that can stand alone.

3.       I was not willing to continue my education.

Because this sentence containing problems which can be described

further

4.       So I continue my studied in the Muhammadiyah University of Metro especially in English department.

Because, typically, On inductive paragraphs, sentences often characterized primary key words like

      - In conclusion.... 

      - What is important.... 

      - So

      - Thus...

5.       Finally, I was able to continue my education in the Muhammadiyah University of Metro.

Because, typically, On inductive paragraphs, sentences often characterized primary key words like

      - In conclusion.... 

      - What is important.... 

      - So

      - Thus...

6.       I would make my family proud of me.
            Because this sentence is a complete sentence that can stand alone.




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