WRITING TASK (Describing My Self)

Paragraph is a small unit of organization in writing in which all related sentence develop one main idea.  

A paragraph is adequately developed when it describes, explains and supports the topic sentence. If the "promise" of the topic sentence is not fulfilled, or if the reader is left with questions after reading the paragraph, the paragraph has not been adequately developed.

1.    How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate unity:

To write paragraph, you should put into three of component of paragraphs namely:  topic sentence, Body or supporting sentence, and concluding sentence. another good criterion of the paragraph is unity. Unity means that a paragraph discussed one and only one main idea from the beginning to end. 

Unity is state the main idea of the paragraph in a clearly constructed topic sentence. Make sure each sentence is related to the central thought.

2. Coherence is one of the two criteria of good paragraph.. Coherence refers to the extent to which the flow of ideas in a paragraph is easily understood by the reader. Coherence is closely related to unity. When a writer changes main ideas or topics within a paragraph, confusion often results. To achieve coherence, then, a writer should show how all of the ideas contained in a paragraph are relevant to the main topic. Coherence Arrange ideas in a clear, logical order. Provide appropriate transitions to the subsequent paragraph. Coherence means establishing a relationship between the ideas presented in a paragraph. Coherence and unity mean that a paragraph has one main idea and all the supporting sentences and detail are hold together with appropriate transitions. 


3. Descriptive paragraph (Describing My Self) 

'' This Is Me ''

Well, in here I would like to tell you about myself. Everything, that related about me. In this paragraph I want describe about me and how my life in general.

      My name is dwi astuti, My nickname is dwi.  I am 21^th years old. I was born in Mulya Asri on March, 03^th 1993. I am the second child in my family, so my parent’s give me name dwi. I have one brother, and I do not have sister. I have parents’ who extraordinary. They are Sandiman and Saryanti. Now I am a student on Muhammadiyah University especially on English department and I am in ^4th semester.

       I am a simple woman; I’m not tall and not so pretty. I have a sweat creamy yellow skin. My hair is straight and long. My nose is not pointed. I have chubby cheeks and small eyes.  People said, if my eyes like the eyes of Chinese people :-D . I am  a spoiled child in my family, because my parents always spoiling me since I was child. Until now, I still cannot become an adult. I am including a cheerful girl, friendly, patient and like to help people who need help. I was born from a simple family of Java. I live in Tulang Bawang Barat with the wonderful family. They are my motivation, And I will make they proud of me. My village is so comfortable. And my village far from the crowds. But, I really feel comfortable in my village because, many memories and much love that I get there. My hobbies are watching the movie, shopping  and listening to the music. I got interested with this hobby when I still in junior high school. Listening music can make me enjoy and comfortable. When I feel bored and have some problem, I always listening music. The activities that can make me enjoy and I doing when I have free time is shopping and hanging out with my friends.

 Okay, that's all about me. Always improve myself to be a better person in the future. And I will make my parents proud of me.

Whatever and however people talk about me. This is me, and until whenever will still be me.

Note  :    

Orange     : Title

Blue        : Introduction

Green        : Identification

Red          : Description

White       : Conclusion