Senin, 07 April 2014

Identifying Narrative Paragraph With and Without Topic Sentence



              

 Incredible Experience in My Life

 In the village, there was a girl named dwi astuti. She was the cheerful girl and spoiled girl. She was me. In my lived I had so many experiences. There are the good and the bad experience. From child hood until adulthood, many memories that could not forgot.
One of them is about the problems in my lived.  When I was in junior high school, I had a dream to become a midwife. Because, I felt happy when saw people worked in the health world. And I think it was the noble job. But, because there are so many problems in my lived, it made my future cannot be achieved. When I graduate from the senior high school around 2011, I felt happy because my family had allowed me to continue my studied in the midwife faculty. But, when I would do the registration, my grandmother was sick. And the costs for the payment to my education used for the treatment of my grandmother’s. Therefore, I had decided to continue my studied in the STAIN. At the time, I had received in the STAIN. But, when I would re-registration, my family had the problem. The problem is I lost both my motorcycles in the next morning. It was made me felt hopeless and at the time, I was not willing to continue my education. And I decided to stop my education until one year.  My father’s always gave me motivation to continue my studied, and he always asked me to keep my spirit. Because it, I try to changed my mind. And I would made my family proud of me, so I continue my studied in the Muhammadiyah University of Metro especially in English department.
Finally, I was able to continue my education in the Muhammadiyah University of Metro, my beloved campus. In this campus I had much knowledge. In this campus I felt comfortable with the good friends and the handsome and beautiful lectures. Although everything was different from my ideals, I remain grateful to god. Because, I believed god was knows which the best to my lived was. And I think this is the great or the incredible experienced of my lived. Because, so many obstacle to continue my education. And I would be wasting this opportunity. I would make my family proud of me. And this all was become incredible experience in my lived, and taught how to be a person who never gave up.




Identifying the paragraph
  


A.    Theme                     :  Great Experience
B.     Plot                         :  Forward
C.     Title                        :  Incredible Experience in My Lived
D.    Characters              :  I ( cheerful and spoiled girl ),   my father and Family  ( Motivator ).
E.     Setting   
      a. Place                  :  In the village, in the STAIN, In the Universities Muhammadiyah
                                       Of Metro.
                        b.Time                    :  2011
                                         c. Situation             :  Quiet.





F. Climax                 : I had received in the STAIN. But, when I would re-registration, my family had the problem. The problem is I lost both my motorcycles in the next morning. It was made me felt hopeless and at the time, I was not willing to continue my education. And finally I decided to stop my education until one year.  My father’s always gave me motivation to continue my studied, and he always asked me kept my spirit. Because I would made my family proud of me, so I continue my studied in the Muhammadiyah Universities  of Metro especially in English department. 


G.  The Purpose of Narrative Paragraph Writing
      The purpose of this paragraph writing is to tell the reader about the writer's Incredible Experience when the writer would continue the education.  


        H.  The underline sentence are the topic sentence.


        I. The Generic Structure of Narrative Paragraph:  
 
a.    Orientation (Consist of Introduction, Characters, setting)
b.    Complication (consist of plot, climax, and problem solving)
c.     Resolution (consist of conclusion).




                            Structure        
Text



Orientation
               In the village, there was a girl named dwi astuti. She was the cheerful girl and spoiled girl. She was me. In my lived I had so many experiences. There are the good and the bad experience. From child hood until adulthood, many memories that could not forgot.











Complication
One of them is about the problems in my lived.  When I was in junior high school, I had a dream to become a midwife. Because, I felt happy when saw people worked in the health world. And I think it was the noble job. But, because there are so many problems in my lived, it made my future cannot be achieved. When I graduate from the senior high school around 2011, I felt happy because my family had allowed me to continue my studied in the midwife faculty. But, when I would did the registration, my grandmother was sick. And the costs for the payment to my education used for the treatment of my grandmother’s. Therefore, I had decided to continue my studied in the STAIN. At the time, I had received in the STAIN. But, when I would re-registration, my family had the problem. The problem is I lost both my motorcycles in the next morning. It was made me felt hopeless and at the time, I was not willing to continue my education. And finally I decided to stop my education until one year.  My father’s always gave me motivation to continue my studied, and he always asked me kept my spirit. Because I would made my family proud of me, so I continue my studied in the Muhammadiyah University of Metro especially in English department.
 Resolution
Finally, I was able to continue my education in here, my beloved campus. Although everything was different from my ideals, I remain grateful to god. Because, I believed god was knows which the best to my lived was. And I think this is the great or the incredible experienced of my lived. Because, so many obstacle to continue my education. And I would be wasting this opportunity. I would make my family proud of me. And this all was become incredible experience in my lived, and taught how to be a person who never gave up.


 

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